Avengium
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Post by Avengium on Sept 27, 2016 16:49:40 GMT
Hi Bandaids, I thought on a thread for putting in the poems we make in our houses and countries. I think this thread is the first for this matter here. We can upload or re-write here our poems. Also we can put links to our blogs, webs or entries with original poems. Everyone can put here his/her/it/their poems but try not to spam a dozen of poems at a time or several posts with lenghty poems consecutively.
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Avengium
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Post by Avengium on Sept 27, 2016 18:35:27 GMT
I'm gonna submit poems in spanish because spanish is my native language. I'm not really good at making poems. But i try sometimes. Some have rhymes in spanish:
Title: Ahí estaba Author: (De Ángel Montero Lamas "Avengium")
Ahí estaba, Pulsaba sin cesar. Como atrapado por la cadencia, Navegaba a su pesar. Se encontraba ahí, Atado al espaldar De su silla y de su imaginación Que viajaba sin parar. ¿Donde su historia Iba a acabar? El no conocía A que puerto arribar.
END / FIN.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 28, 2016 18:24:05 GMT
I'm gonna submit poems in spanish because spanish is my native language. I'm not really good at making poems. But i try sometimes. Some have rhymes in spanish: Title: Ahí estaba Author: (De Ángel Montero Lamas "Avengium") Ahí estaba, Pulsaba sin cesar. Como atrapado por la cadencia, Navegaba a su pesar. Se encontraba ahí, Atado al espaldar De su silla y de su imaginación Que viajaba sin parar. ¿Donde su historia Iba a acabar? El no conocía A que puerto arribar. END / FIN. I can't speak Spanish but I put this into google translate (obviously the translation wasn't perfect haha) and I really liked it, it's a great idea with nice descriptions. Honestly, I have quite an extensive collection of my own poetry but am frightened to post any haha.
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Avengium
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Post by Avengium on Sept 30, 2016 14:21:47 GMT
I can't speak Spanish but I put this into google translate (obviously the translation wasn't perfect haha) and I really liked it, it's a great idea with nice descriptions. Honestly, I have quite an extensive collection of my own poetry but am frightened to post any haha. @ezzz, i'm shy, you know, but i posted this because i trust in the people i know from BA.
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Post by ben545 on Sept 30, 2016 21:15:10 GMT
Avril Lavigne is so pretty, It makes me depressed and feel pretty shitty, So I come onto bandaids to cheer myself up, With like minded people who don't give a fuck. What the world thinks of their strange obsession, Learning things about Avril in our own little lesson. So to those who poo poo this social site, They will be banned for not acting right.
Da, darr !! A poem.
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Avengium
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Post by Avengium on Sept 30, 2016 23:53:36 GMT
This one for H.P. lovecraft:
Con un semblante imposible (De Ángel Montero Lamas "Avengium")
El ser le miraba Con un semblante imposible, Su geometría no cuadraba Algo en él era risible. Y algo tenebroso Mas alla de lo sostenible. Aquel ser de ultratumba, Era inadmisible. Su mirada producía arcadas, Y deseos incontenibles, De violencia, pasión y cosas inconcebibles. Ese ser era ajeno a todo, A todo lo conocible. Y cuando se hartaba de ti .... Cuando se hartaba de ti, sus mandibulas eran indefectibles, Como espacios elásticos engullian Engullian lo inconsumible. Y aún más, Sus pensamientos atónito te dejaban, Y convertían lo incorruptible En sirviente de su poder, De su poder irreprimible.
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Post by BogoGog24 on Oct 2, 2016 15:17:08 GMT
We used to have a poem of the week on the old site and this was one I submitted for an Avril theme:
Avril Lavigne Pop/rock queen Since the age of seventeen
Baggy pants, tank tops, and ties Skateboards and eyeliner No disguise
Pens her own songs, rocks out on guitar If you’re a fan, you’re a little Black Star
Abbey Dawn, Forbidden Rose Avril designs the coolest clothes
She played an awesome possum In Over the Hedge And sang “We Are Family” With Sister Sledge
Alanis Morissette and Pat Benatar These women inspired Avril To become a rock star
Avril Lavigne Pop/rock queen She’s “the best damn thing Your eyes have ever seen”
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Post by BogoGog24 on Oct 2, 2016 15:19:46 GMT
Here's one I wrote some years ago:
My life has been made By the work of human hands Traveling far and wide Over these god forsaken lands
Passion drove me out To seek waters blue These forbidden seas and skies That only dreamers have traveled to
Days that are lonely Never did show me All that I might have asked for
My path was broken By words unspoken And all that I might have known
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Post by Dee on Nov 1, 2016 13:54:25 GMT
Oh wow I'm gonna love this thread. I write my own songs and poetry. This is a recent poem, called Tragic Sentimentality:
The dread and terror cover me at night, they give me peaceful sleep. The fear, distress keeps following - I pray the gods my soul to keep.
The dark, the gloomy Autumn's night brings memories with misty sights. The fog descends, from wooden height below the trees' old wisdom's might.
The past now seeps down through my bones. I start to weep then, as it flows. But somewhere deep in my crushed soul The pain will bring me peace, I know.
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